Comments on: Book Excerpt: Objects Are Closer Than They Appear

By: Gabrielle

Gabrielle — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 20:37:30 +0000

Thank you for posting this excerpt. The characterisation is deeply embedded not just in the speech, but everywhere. These characters, though fictional, exist right from the beginning. They breathe and so this reader, at least, has no difficulty in believing that they will go on doing their own thing without obvious author intrusion. Very, very well done. I’ll be looking out for your stuff in future.

By: yolande

yolande — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 15:12:56 +0000

I agree with Jerry – I do believe I must find the book to read more.

By: Brenda

Brenda — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 02:38:59 +0000

Tammi Jean’s anger, and her mother’s come through loud and clear. An angry, young, redneck psychic — wow! As with your other contribution, I am left wanting to know more about your characters. Is Tammi Jean’s father alive? What will happen next? Great suspense.

By: Jerry

Jerry — Sun, 15 Nov 2009 12:51:02 +0000

Now I think I have to buy the book