This is a test posting to help resolve issues and try new features.
Joseph perched precariously on the narrow concrete berm, staring at the pounding waves 100 feet below. He paused momentarily, then his decision became crystal clear. He noticed movement to his left, a young man was approaching. The young man smiled and waved a friendly hello with his right arm, while his left arm cradled a dark object. The next few seconds were critical, so Joseph knew he must act now.
On the lower level of the bridge an accident had forced a car off the side and it hung half on and half off the bridge. He could see two small children, their mouths open in screams silenced by the wind and pounding waves below. The driver, an elderly woman, was slumped over the steering wheel, not moving.
Joseph had never liked heights. When he heard the crash and stopped to see what had happened, his first inclination was to get back in his car and let emergency workers do their thing. But he didn’t see anyone crowding around the wrecked car, and there were no comforting sounds of sirens approaching. Didn’t anyone care enough to stop or call 911?
So he climbed over the guardrail to assess the situation. The approaching young man must have thought he was a jumper and was planning to talk him down, but Joseph knew what he must do. It had been many years since his gymnastic days, but he still had good balance and upper arm strength. So he held onto the guard rail with one arm and stretched to reach the bridge guy wire that ran between levels of the bridge.
If he couldn’t hold on, or lost control he knew he would die. But the children’s terrorized faces would be with him for a lifetime if he didn’t do something. He got a good grip on the guy wire and swung his legs over, clamping around the thick steel cable. Slowly lowering himself, he gained confidence that he could get to the car in time. It was rocking a bit in the wind, but looked stable.
It was slow going, but he was making progress, willing himself not to think of the pounding water below. A movement above him caught his eye. The young man who thought he was a jumper was leaning over the guardrail. “Call 911!” Joseph screamed. But the young man continued to smile while he pointed something at Joseph.
“A gun? He’s pointing a gun at me?” Joseph tried to raise one hand to sig…the flash was blinding. An instant to realize he was shot, then quiet, black, spinning darkness.
He awoke with a start! Sweat poured from every pore and his heart was pounding. “Oh, my God! That was a dream, more like a nightmare. So real.” Slowly his heart came back to normal and he could sit up. “It was that Bourne adventure movie,” he said to himself. “Bourne was being chased and jumped off a bridge to save himself.”
“I dreamed I was Bourne. And that large everything pizza and three beers to wash it down. Never again.”
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Please rate this, any rating at all. Rate it multiple times, multiple choices, i.e. 3, 4, 1, etc. And please report what you did and the results in a comment. Thanks.





Are there are any artists out there who are willing to create an original Editors Choice Award icon and/or an original logo for the Fiction Writers’ Platform? I can’t offer cash, but would provide attribution and a link to your site.
That Editor’s Choice icon is kind of cute.
I was able to rate this more than once, and this story had me on the edge of my seat!
It appears that ratings continue to work as intended.
Ratings should now be up to date. Still, I’d appreciate if as many readers as possible would rate this posting just to be sure there were no further problems.
I’ve switched to a different rating plugin, which seems to be working well. The downside is that previous ratings couldn’t be automatically carried over, so I’ll add them back in manually over the next few days.
This plugin allows both ratings of 1 to 5 stars and thumbs up/down, for those simply preferring to that scheme. For now I have both activated.
I’m going to disable the rating plugin software and reinstall it to see if that solves the problem. If not, I’ll remove it and install another rating product.
I couldn’t rate this at all.
Jerry, it didn’t work at all for me. No changes occur when I pass over the stars.
It appears the first vote locked out future votes. I deleted the first vote and was able to vote then. Let’ see if others can vote, too.
I was unable to rate this after it had been rated once by John. It appears the rating system is getting locked out after one vote. Still pursuing ideas, but I may switch to another rating system or abandon altogether.
I came back onto this page again and tried to rate the article but it would not let me. The stars were yellow and did not change to red as I passed over them this second time.
Regards:
John
That worked ok the first time!