Comments on: Puppy Love

By: Charlotte Cook

Charlotte Cook — Fri, 19 Mar 2010 12:03:57 +0000

This was a wonderful story and so fits what I am going through right now. Thank you for sharing Carol

By: Doris Mawyer

Doris Mawyer — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 12:57:13 +0000

What a wonderful story! Loved the characters. I was surprised to discover it was not a YA story, but so much the better! A little twist kept me interested right to the end.

By: Arlene Hauben

Arlene Hauben — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 08:06:37 +0000

We value your thoughtful comments.What did you like/dislike?What would improve it?

It is a simple and sweet story, not overwritten. Would like it to be longer, more detail.

By: Brenda

Brenda — Wed, 10 Feb 2010 21:12:02 +0000

I like this story very much. It’s a novel take on the title, and I enjoy the way you present the elderly residents as fully human persons rather than just “old people.”

By: yolande

yolande — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 19:49:43 +0000

Very well written. I truly enjoyed the subtle hints at the age of Madeline right from the make-up to the point where one realizes this is an elderly lady. A wonderful story to illustrate the meaning Valentine’s Day.

By: michelle

michelle — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 16:59:21 +0000

I read the title and thought the story would be about young poeple, as the expression “puppy love” is normally associated with young people. I like the story. It’s simple and short but still had room for the character’s histories.

I think near the beginning where it says “current jelly,” it should be “currant” as in the berry.