Comments on: Abiding Love – Part Two http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/2010/03/abiding-love-part-two/ The Showcase for Fiction Writers Thu, 02 Feb 2012 14:22:23 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Jerry http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/2010/03/abiding-love-part-two/comment-page-1/#comment-193 Jerry Wed, 03 Mar 2010 12:19:28 +0000 http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/?p=1186#comment-193 As with part one, this is well-written. Felicity and Joseph seem nice enough people, the other characters are still unknowns to the reader. What seems lacking to me is some punch, something that grabs an emotion and tugs me into feeling something more intense for the characters. The premise has promise, I'm anxious to see it unfold. Thanks for contributing, keep it up! As with part one, this is well-written. Felicity and Joseph seem nice enough people, the other characters are still unknowns to the reader. What seems lacking to me is some punch, something that grabs an emotion and tugs me into feeling something more intense for the characters.

The premise has promise, I’m anxious to see it unfold.

Thanks for contributing, keep it up!

]]> By: Brenda http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/2010/03/abiding-love-part-two/comment-page-1/#comment-192 Brenda Tue, 02 Mar 2010 21:31:45 +0000 http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/?p=1186#comment-192 I'm wondering why Joseph's parents were so short with Felicity. Was there a problem with that relationship? Will Felicity have to win over both Joseph and his parents now? I’m wondering why Joseph’s parents were so short with Felicity. Was there a problem with that relationship? Will Felicity have to win over both Joseph and his parents now?

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