http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/2010/03/asharif/ The Showcase for Fiction Writers Thu, 02 Feb 2012 14:22:23 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/2010/03/asharif/comment-page-1/#comment-201 Brenda Tue, 09 Mar 2010 15:12:03 +0000 http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/?p=1220#comment-201 Another fine story. Could any of the society people ever be wise, or would that complicate the story too much? There is a definite similarity to Christianity here. Must we always kill our prophets? Interesting. Another fine story. Could any of the society people ever be wise, or would that complicate the story too much? There is a definite similarity to Christianity here. Must we always kill our prophets? Interesting.

]]> http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/2010/03/asharif/comment-page-1/#comment-199 michelle Mon, 08 Mar 2010 21:34:57 +0000 http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/?p=1220#comment-199 I started wondering what this story was really about while reading it, and I also found a bit of Jesus in there. Your characterization is quite nice, the descriptive paragraphs making the reader feel for the protagonist. I started wondering what this story was really about while reading it, and I also found a bit of Jesus in there. Your characterization is quite nice, the descriptive paragraphs making the reader feel for the protagonist.

]]> http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/2010/03/asharif/comment-page-1/#comment-198 PhilipBradbury Mon, 08 Mar 2010 08:46:04 +0000 http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/?p=1220#comment-198 Thank you, Jerry, and the ending surptised me when I wrote it! I had planned for quite a different ending and,as I was about to carry on, something inside said to turn left and finish it right there, this way! As usual, I did what I was told! Thank you, Jerry, and the ending surptised me when I wrote it! I had planned for quite a different ending and,as I was about to carry on, something inside said to turn left and finish it right there, this way! As usual, I did what I was told!

]]> http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/2010/03/asharif/comment-page-1/#comment-197 Jerry Sun, 07 Mar 2010 20:02:42 +0000 http://www.fictionwritersplatform.net/?p=1220#comment-197 Oh, this is good. The kind of story that you finish and then start wondering if it was really about A, or B, or maybe C? A bit of Jesus, a touch of Kahlil (did I spell that correctly?). Oh, this is good. The kind of story that you finish and then start wondering if it was really about A, or B, or maybe C? A bit of Jesus, a touch of Kahlil (did I spell that correctly?).

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