Comments on: Pillow Talk

By: michelle

michelle — Mon, 22 Mar 2010 14:00:22 +0000

Very nice. This story is certainly an interesting way of talking about death without being morbid, imagining the thoughts of a dead person. It’s easy to know the characters just through what they think or say.

By: Jerry

Jerry — Sun, 21 Mar 2010 10:30:52 +0000

I love it! The dead characters really come alive if that makes any sense. An interesting and creative view of emergence. Thanks for contributing.

By: tricia

tricia — Sat, 20 Mar 2010 23:29:15 +0000

Thank you for your comment, Brenda. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story! I had a blast writing it.

By: Brenda

Brenda — Sat, 20 Mar 2010 12:47:08 +0000

Excellent! I really enjoyed it. Blake Carson’s personality comes through loud and clear. It’s an interesting idea that another, older soul died at the same time in order to help Blake’s soul with the transition.